Tanka Poem: Ethan in the Orange Grove

A tanka poem has 31 syllables in a 5/7/5/7/7 pattern. Also, the first two lines are more descriptive and image-focused, shifting to a more reflective metaphor, simile, or personification in the closing lines.

I wrote this to describe three-year-old Ethan at the orange grove:

Loping down the path
He has no concern or fear
He runs with wildness
Like a hungry coyote 
In search of a tasty hare

This is post-run, clearly.

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  1. Jeanne Guy's avatar Jeanne Guy says:

    Beyond adorable… xox J

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  2. Thanks, Jeanne. Hugs.

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