Haiku: California Daffodils

 

A field of bright gold
Like thousands of caution lights
Atop grey green poles

Triangular flags
Surround fluted golden orbs
Shimmer in the breeze

Gray skies and storm clouds
Winter tree limb silhouettes
Swathed in golden cloth

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  1. Tess Kann's avatar Tess Kann says:

    Delicious. ‘Gold’ and ‘golden’ give off evoke such brightness in contract to gray clouds etc..

    1. Thanks so much. I was hoping that would come through!

  2. applenpear's avatar buddhafulkat says:

    Fantastic imagery and descriptive writing!

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