This is a rewrite of a first-draft flash fiction piece I shared here on my blog a couple of weeks back. I pared that piece down and killed a few darlings along the way. I was motivated to rewrite when a member of my critique group said, “I think you have something here, but please…

Here is a photo essay of our recent trip to the county fair. Suffice it to say that food played a major role in this adventure. Lots of people, lots of fun, and well worth the trip! Welcome to the Ventura County Fair This is such a bad photo, it makes me laugh out loud….