Prompt: Haiku: Cold Cross-Town Trip at 2 am

Entering the cold
A frigid winter’s evening
Hides inside the car

Cross town trip drags by
Car heater spews icy air
Legs quiver and quake

Front door lock resists
Wind so cold it slides through clothes
Home awaits with warmth

Gas stoves radiate
Shivers are replaced with heat
A happy relief

A night filled with friends
Jokes, laughter, and lots of fun
‘Til the car ride home

3 am is near
Yawns say it is time for bed
Grateful to be home

2 Comments Add yours

  1. Pat Bean's avatar Pat Bean says:

    beautiful way to journal about a day. Thanks for sharing.

  2. Tess Kann's avatar Tess Kann says:

    Yours was the first Haiku I’d read. Have come across some others but really like yours.

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